Good. Nice close-up of foot going in and hand coming out at end.
Questions for you to think/sketch about. Could second shot show door closing? Is front of tel. booth consistent from first frame to last? Direction of interior person the way you want him to be? Does it always face left? right? doesn't matter? How do you show time passing as booth enjoys a bit of a vacation? How long/short is that time? Sound? Some motion(s)? If box is further right in frame and bird has a bit farther to zing across frame would that be funnier? more shocking? What if burn came zapping down? Arcing down? Dive bombing down? Other? Sound? Does booth respond to shock of bird hitting? What happens when box disappears? Fade? Effects?
Good smoke coming out of train. What happens when train hits booth? Good that this attack is from right rather than left as bird did. Yes? No? I think teetering of box on edge of cliff might be jolly good.
What is complete sequence of motions booth makes while falling? left? right? torque? spin? tumble? straight down? Stretch somewhere, and squash and stretch at end? Rigid the whole way? How do you show length of fall? Time passing? A lot? Little? Is booth on first base? second? third? home? outfield? What happens when ball is caught? Interesting that you don't see baseball field.... Booth appears to start large, and get smaller as it goes through many trials, and then returns to large at the end. Something like that. Does that have a meaning?
Good. Nice close-up of foot going in and hand coming out at end.
ReplyDeleteQuestions for you to think/sketch about.
Could second shot show door closing?
Is front of tel. booth consistent from first frame to last? Direction of interior person the way you want him to be? Does it always face left? right? doesn't matter?
How do you show time passing as booth enjoys a bit of a vacation? How long/short is that time? Sound? Some motion(s)?
If box is further right in frame and bird has a bit farther to zing across frame would that be funnier? more shocking?
What if burn came zapping down? Arcing down? Dive bombing down? Other? Sound?
Does booth respond to shock of bird hitting?
What happens when box disappears? Fade? Effects?
Good smoke coming out of train.
What happens when train hits booth?
Good that this attack is from right rather than left as bird did. Yes? No?
I think teetering of box on edge of cliff might be jolly good.
What is complete sequence of motions booth makes while falling? left? right? torque? spin? tumble? straight down? Stretch somewhere, and squash and stretch at end? Rigid the whole way?
How do you show length of fall? Time passing? A lot? Little?
Is booth on first base? second? third? home? outfield?
What happens when ball is caught?
Interesting that you don't see baseball field....
Booth appears to start large, and get smaller as it goes through many trials, and then returns to large at the end. Something like that. Does that have a meaning?
Thanks.